#23 - Blue Mountains (A Triolet)

Attempt at a triolet, a form which I find difficult but want to be better at. Prompt here.

The mountains stretch across the land

The river's mouth amongst the clouds

I wish that I could understand

The mountains. Stretch across the land,

Blue mountains upon where you stand,

Safe from the problems and the crowds.

The mountains stretch. Across the land,

The river's mouth, amongst the clouds.