The Great Catch Up Day - Poems #28-30



Finishing off the month with something a little simpler..

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Lanturne #1

Stars
Comfort
Remind you
You are always
Loved

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Lanturne #2

Skies
Contain
Hope and peace
Watch the birds, they
Know

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Lanturne #3

Cat
Whiskers
Find their way
Sensors, almost
Radars

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Yes, I did somewhat get lazy towards the end.. but it is 23:42 and I think it's fair to say I'm a little tired! It was a fun month, anyhow. Better than last year in numbers!


Disclaimer: These are poems I won't be spending a lot of time on. As such, I don't expect perfection (neither do I need it). However feel free to tell me what you think about them, and if you enjoy certain lines more than others - I'm quite OK with constructive criticism!

Are you participating in NaPo? Do you write poetry? Feel free to comment below and leave a link to your day one poems, and any general comments you wish to leave.

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  1. Maude Lynn1 May 2014 at 17:11

    I love that second one!

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  2. kaykuala6 May 2014 at 00:49

    Beautifully done lanturnes, Kerri! Fun write! It looks simple but one must have the natural sense of humor to make it work. And you did!

    Hank

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    1. Kerridwen7 May 2014 at 00:03

      I'm happy you like it! I'd never heard of this form before! :)

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